Revision request: Something more mature like this maybe https://www.facebook.com/alok.appadurai

It looks a bit too much like cartoon. Thank you.

This is nice too https://www.facebook.com/itsmodernmillie

If you feel like this picture would work better, let’s try it
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1GbnLXGmvbZI94qj8tbwSCUxG-EJnEkTI/view?usp=sharing

Thank you